Kardiyoloji

[Explanation1]: Grammar:
Countable nouns are usually preceded by determiners. Terms such as “complex” and “interval” are countable nouns, and therefore, a determiner has been added.

[Explanation2]: Style:
Abbreviations are spelled out at their first mention in the manuscript according to the standard academic convention.

[Explanation3]: Grammar:
Here the addition of the term “interval” was necessary to make the sentence clear.

[Explanation4]: Language enhancement:
Noun added for clarity.

[Explanation5]: Consistency:
The term “seconds” has been used in three different ways in the manuscript. We have consistently abbreviated it to “s” throughout.

[Explanation6]: Grammar:
Tense changed to past tense for grammatical correctness.

[Explanation7]: Language enhancement:
Usually a list is preceded by terms such as “follows” and “following”

[Explanation8]: Spacing:
Extra spaces between terms and sentences has been eliminated to give the manuscript a polished appearance.

[Explanation9]: Typographical error: The spelling of the term has been rectified.

[Explanation10]: Grammar:
When referring to a subject introduced in the preceding sentence, it is preferable to use a pronoun.

[Explanation11]: Language enhancement:
A better word choice in this context is “abnormal”

[Explanation12]: Language correction:
Words revised for better flow of information and grammatical correctness.

[Explanation13]: Language enhancement:
An unbiased word choice in this context is “athletes.”

[Explanation14]: Language correctness:
The wordy expression has been replaced by a direct and accurate term.

[Explanation15]: Language correctness:
Adverb placement has been corrected here for accuracy.

[Explanation16]: Grammar:
“Disorder” is a countable noun and is usually preceded by a definite article.

[Explanation17]: Grammar:
Technical term corrected for accuracy.

[Explanation18]: Style of English:
In American English, commas are inserted before the conjunctions “and” and “or” in list of more than two objects.

[Explanation19]: Language correctness:
The original wording was too colloquial for an academic document.

[Explanation20]: Subject changes:
Generally, all non-standard abbreviations are expected to be spelled out at the first mention. The author has been notified of this through a remark.

[Explanation21]: Grammar:
The preposition has been corrected.

[Explanation22]: Consistency:
The data presentation style is kept consistent by using “sodium” throughout the manuscript.

[Explanation23]: Style:
An abbreviation is defined at first mention.

[Explanation24]: Grammar:
The verb “is” was missing making the sentence awkward.

[Explanation25]: Language enhancement:
The phrase has been replaced by a direct and accurate term.

[Explanation26]: Punctuation:
The term “re-entry” is hyphenated.

[Explanation27]: Language enhancement:
The verb form has replaced the nominalization for easy readability.

[Explanation28]: Language correctness:
The original wording was too colloquial for an academic document.

[Explanation29]: Language correctness:
This is a literary term and is not preferred in scientific writing.

[Explanation30]: Subject changes:
The unclear sentence is queried for clarity using a remark and an alternative option suggested.

[Explanation31]: Style:
An abbreviation defined in the first mention need not be repeated in the manuscript according to the standard academic convention.

[Explanation32]: Grammar:
The preposition has been corrected.