Yoğun Madde Fiziği

[Explanation1]: Capitalization:
Since “Hall” is the name of a person, it should be capitalized. The revision has been made throughout the paper for consistency.

[Explanation2]: Readability:
Better sentence construction for readability.

[Explanation3]: Academic language:
“In addition” is a formal word choice widely used in academic writing.

[Explanation4]: Punctuation:
In academic writing, contractions are discouraged.

[Explanation5]: Word choice:
The incorrect word choice has been corrected.

[Explanation6]: Grammar:
In the passive voice, adverbs of manner are generally placed between the helping and main verbs or after the verb phrase.

[Explanation7]: Typographical error:
Corrected

[Explanation8]: Style:
In American English, the relative pronoun “that” is used to introduce restrictive clauses.

[Explanation9]: Language enhancement:
Redundant phrases make a sentence wordy. Being economical in writing enhances clarity of meaning and readability of the sentence.

[Explanation10]: Grammar:
The singular count noun “graphene” requires a singular verb, and hence the revision.

[Explanation11]: Grammar:
In a list starting with "such as" or "including," the use of "etc" and "and so on" is redundant