Kontrol Sistemleri Mühendisliği

[Explanation1]: Attention to detail:
The revision has been made for style consistency.

[Explanation2]: Word choice:
Choosing the right word to convey meaning eases readability and understanding. “Cater” is a more appropriate word in this context.

[Explanation3]: Typographical error:
The spelling error has been corrected here.

[Explanation4]: Style:
In academic writing, when the value is expressed in numerals, the abbreviation of the corresponding unit should be used.

[Explanation5]: Language:
Matching and clearly stating what qualities or entities are being compared makes your content reader-friendly. Here “providing” has been changed to “provide” to make the verb parallel with “achieve.”

[Explanation6]: Attention to detail:
“RF” has been uppercased for consistency.

[Explanation7]: Grammar:
“A” has been added because “radio link” is a singular, countable noun.

[Explanation8]: Grammar:
The plural verb “are” is used as it agrees with the plural noun “antennas.”

[Explanation9]: Word Choice:
A better, more concise word choice has been added here.

[Explanation10]: Grammar:
Note that “data” is the plural form of the noun “datum.” Hence, we have revised the pronoun to “these.”

[Explanation11]: Style:
In American English, the nonrestrictive clause is mostly introduced with the relative pronoun “that.”

[Explanation12]: Grammar:
The adverb has been appropriately placed for fluent readability.