Kurumsal Finans

[Explanation1]: Article Usage:
The definite article is required here as a specific “study” is mentioned.

[Explanation2]: Language:
The word “consider” has been used to maintain the academic tone of the document.

[Explanation3]: Grammar
The subject (“price”) is singular; the verb has been made singular (“observes”).

[Explanation4]: Language:
This sentence has been combined with the preceding sentence ensuring a logical flow of ideas. Thus, redundancies are eliminated.

[Explanation5]: Grammar:
A comma has been inserted here to indicate an introductory participle phrase.

[Explanation6]: Style:
We have followed American English for this document as per journal guidelines. Therefore, double quotes have been used here.

[Explanation7]: Grammar:
The subject (“price”) is singular; the verb has been made singular (“reaches”).

[Explanation8]: Language:
Using appropriate word and phrases ensures the academic tone of the document is maintained. This change is brought to the author’s notice through a remark.

[Explanation9]: Language:
A transition word has been introduced here to ensure a logical flow of ideas. Also, “in reality” has been placed in the appropriate part of the sentence, thus eliminating ambiguity.

[Explanation10]: Grammar:
The subject (“price”) is singular; the verb has been made singular (“picks”).

[Explanation11]: Language:
“Wrong” is a better word choice than “bad” in this instance.

[Explanation12]: Language:
A normal edit reduces lengthy/verbose phrases, thus making the sentence concise.

[Explanation13]: Attention to Detail:
The unnecessary space within the numbers of a value and that between the numeral and percentage symbol have been deleted. In addition, the spaces surrounding the en dash have also been deleted.

[Explanation14]: Grammar:
A hyphen has inserted between “profit” and “taking.”

[Explanation15]: Grammar:
The missing verb “is” has been added.

[Explanation16]: Word choice:
“Maximize” is the appropriate word choice in this instance.

[Explanation17]: Grammar:
The demonstrative adjective "these" (plural) has been used in accordance with the plural noun "limits."

[Explanation18]: Grammar:
The ellipses have been replaced with the correct punctuation mark, i.e., the period.

[Explanation19]: Language:
“Obtain” is a better, more formal word choice than “get,” which sounds colloquial in this instance.

[Explanation20]: Language:
The plural criteria has been corrected to the singular “criterion.”

[Explanation21]: Typographical error:
The error has been corrected.

[Explanation22]: Language:
The tense of this sentence has been corrected, and the formal and appropriate word “frequent” has been added.

[Explanation23]: Attention to detail:
The unnecessary hyphen between the two words has been deleted.

[Explanation24]: Grammar:
The singular noun “investor” has been corrected to its plural form.

[Explanation25]: Attention to detail:
Uppercase letter has been changed to lowercase.

[Explanation26]: Grammar:
The missing comma has been inserted to set off “in contrast.”

[Explanation27]: Attention to detail:
The missing period has been added here.