Ekonomi

[Explanation1]: Grammar:
A definite article has been placed before “market”.

[Explanation2]: Grammar:
Here the term “company” is used in the generic sense. An indefinite article has been placed before “company” to make the sentence grammatically correct.

[Explanation3]: Language:
The modal “must” has been replaced with “should” that indicates a recommendation/advice.

[Explanation4]: Word Choice:
“Expert” enhances the semantic quality of this sentence.

[Explanation5]: Language:
This sentence has been reconstructed in keeping with correct grammar (use of articles), word usage, and sentence structure. Thus the sentence is now distinct in meaning and concise in structure.

[Explanation6]: Language:
An advance edit ensures that sentences are enhanced from the structure and word usage perspective without changing the author’s intended meaning.

[Explanation7]: Grammar:
A comma is required when a transition word introduces a sentence.

[Explanation8]: Grammar:
The pronoun “it” has replaced “follower” to avoid repetition.

[Explanation9]: Word Choice:
Here “holding” has been replaced with the contextually appropriate word “seizing.”

[Explanation10]: Language:
The transition word “thus” has been added to improve logical flow of ideas.

[Explanation11]: Language:
The language has been made consistent by changing “pioneer” to “first-mover.”

[Explanation12]: Language:
This sentence required excessive reconstruction to ensure the information is presented in the most effective manner. The change has been brought to the author’s notice through remarks.