İşletme

[Explanation1]: Language:
By adding the word “projected” here, the flow of information and clarity have been improved.

[Explanation2]: Grammar:
A superlative adjective is preceded by the definite article “the.”

[Explanation3]: Language:
The formal phrase “the next” suits the tone of the document.

[Explanation4]: Typographical error:
The spelling error has been eliminated.

[Explanation5]: Word choice:
Note that the English word choice has been improved.

[Explanation6]: Grammar:
The correct form of the verb (preparing) has been used here.

[Explanation7]: Grammar:
Since “market” is used in the business context, the definite article has been added.

[Explanation8]: Language clarity:
The revision has been made for clarity. Further, the remark inserted advises the author to check for any meaning change that could occur in sentence reconstruction.

[Explanation9]: Punctuation:
The missing comma has been placed after the introductory transition word.

[Explanation10]: Language:
Informal English has been replaced with formal English in accordance with the academic tone of the document.

[Explanation11]: Grammar:
“Consumer” has been changed to “consumers” for grammatical correctness.

[Explanation12]: Punctuation:
Comma has been added here to keep the clarity of the sentence intact and avoid ambiguity.

[Explanation13]: Style:
We have followed American English in this document. Therefore, a serial comma has been added here.

[Explanation14]: Language:
"There are" is not technically incorrect; however, a strong, definite subject makes the meaning clear and the sentence dynamic.

[Explanation15]: Style:
The ampersand symbol has been changed to “and” to maintain the academic formal tone of the document.

[Explanation16]: Language:
Note that "might" is the correct modal to use here as it denotes possibility in a much better sense than “shall.”

[Explanation17]: Punctuation:
The en dash is the correct punctuation to use with a range (US$ 500–700 billion).

[Explanation18]: Grammar:
The incorrect preposition has been deleted.

[Explanation19]: Punctuation:
The missing end punctuation has been added here.

[Explanation20]: Grammar:
When “next” is used before “few years/decade/century,” it must be preceded by the definite article “the.”

[Explanation21]: Punctuation:
A comma is required after an introductory prepositional phrase.

[Explanation22]: Typographical error:
The typographical errors have been rectified.

[Explanation23]: Punctuation:
This word requires an apostrophe as we are referring to a possessive noun.

[Explanation24]: Grammar:
The correct preposition has been added here.

[Explanation25]: Word Choice:
Advance editing checks titles and headings and ensures that they accurately reflect the content.

[Explanation26]: Language:
The sentence has been reconstructed for conciseness and readability.

[Explanation27]: Language:
The sentence has been edited for clarity. The remark here advises the author to check for any meaning change that could occur in sentence reconstruction.

[Explanation28]: Grammar:
The missing verb has been added here for correctness.

[Explanation29]: Language:
The author is informed of any inconsistency in presentation of information.

[Explanation30]: Consistency:
Each bulleted point begins with capital letter; consistency has been maintained.

[Explanation31]: Punctuation:
The hyphen is required in this compound modifier.

[Explanation32]: Word Choice:
The word change here suits the formal tone and intended meaning of the document.

[Explanation33]: Language:
The word change here suits the formal tone of the document.