Sosyoloji

[Explanation1]: Grammar:
“Media” is the plural form of “medium.” The word form has been corrected.

[Explanation2]: Punctuation:
The incorrect comma has been deleted.

[Explanation3]: Correctness of information:
The author is notified of any discrepancy in facts through a remark.

[Explanation4]: Subject area:
There were a number of protests in Iran after the elections in 2009. Hence this noun has been made plural.

[Explanation5]: Grammar:
The appropriate preposition has been added here.

[Explanation6]: Language correctness:
The wordy phrase has been made concise.

[Explanation7]: Language correctness:
The correct word has replaced the awkward coinage.

[Explanation8]: Punctuation:
This word is not hyphenated.

[Explanation9]: Correctness of information:
Many social networking channels exist. The sentence has been revised accordingly.

[Explanation10]: Language correctness:
An appropriate word has replaced the awkward expression.

[Explanation11]: Punctuation:
Missing comma has been added between coordinate adjectives.

[Explanation12]: Typographical error The error has been corrected.

[Explanation13]: Language correctness:
The expression has been made concise.

[Explanation14]: Grammar “Like” has been replaced by “such as” to denote what follows are examples.

[Explanation15]: Grammar:
Singular count nouns take a determiner before them; an appropriate determiner “this” has been added.

[Explanation16]: Sentence structure:
By eliminating redundancy and using appropriate words, the sentence has been enhanced for better readability.

[Explanation17]: Sentence structure:
The sentence meaning is now clear with the correct structural changes and word revisions.

[Explanation18]: Grammar:
The definite article is required in this of-construction.

[Explanation19]: Language correctness:
Appropriate word choice has been used.

[Explanation20]: Language enhancement:
The word choice is made appropriate for academic writing.

[Explanation21]: Technical word choice:
The incorrect word has been replaced with the correct discipline-specific word.

[Explanation22]: Organization The Conclusion section must not contain new information. This discrepancy has been brought to the author’s notice through a remark.

[Explanation23]: Typographical error:
The correction has been made.

[Explanation24]: Language enhancement:
The sentence mood has been revised in keeping with academic tone.

[Explanation25]: Sentence reconstruction:
For better sentence transition, the sentence structure and connecting word have been revised. British English spelling has been maintained and the nonrestrictive clause has been correctly punctuated.